Journey to jo burg

Hi my name is Hibo and I have been reading this book called journey to Jo'burg with my reading group. It was really interesting and I hope you like my slides and you guys should read it.

The Telescopic Text

This term I was learning to add details to our writing  by stretching sentences. We do this by adding adjectives, verbs, adverbs, similes and metaphors.We discovered this new website called Telescopic text.

Here is my work that I did. Hope you like it!!

 You should give it a go 
http://www.telescopictext.org/write/


Blog you later Hibo :)